@phil Fantastic Voyage - Script - Draft Scene 1

Draft script

Scene 1.

Camera rolls down in to a scene where the cells are queuing up to go through the portal. Camera focuses on one particularly odd cell (cancer cell) as he waits in boredom.  

  

Computer – welcome to the cell cycle. You are currently in the G 1 phase. While you wait patiently for the portal, prepare yourself and be sure to have the correct information.

Camera cuts

Now the green cell is near the front of the queue

Camera is now focusing on the portal and cells being scanned. A healthy cell gets scanned and the lights goes green and the portal opens up.

Computer – Access granted. Please advance to the S phase.

A cell much like the last but is covered in spots approaches the scanner. Seconds later the light start flashing red and the portal opens.

Computer – Access denied. Please exit and awaits further instructions in the G 0 phase.

The green cell casually floats towards the scanner. The control pod carefully scans him. The light starts to flash red and the cell starts to freak out and meddles with the control pod and the light start suddenly turn green.

Computer – Please proceed to S phase.

Portal opens and the green cell goes through.

As Dr. Klapper said that i had to cut out scene 2 where the green cell got to the G 0 phase, this is my solution as i want to still show that it exists. In doing this I've made my T cell character redundant.