Douy Singsamran : February 2017

Sunday, 5 February 2017

@Phil FSTS - Final draft

Quickly run through my story before going to adobe story.

- The circus is in town.

- Jimmy is cleaning the mermaid tank.

- The strongman Frank throws him in to the tank and says “you’d make a nice little freak show of you own” Whilst flexing his biceps.

- Jimmy is cleaning the toilet.

- Frank pick up the cubical and shakes it with Jimmy still inside.

- Jimmy comes out soaked.

- Frank strikes a pose.

- Jimmy is mopping the floor.

- Frank trips his up and mops the floor with him (literally).

- Feeling sorry for jimmy, Mary the mermaid yells at frank telling him to stop.

- We see anger in frank face as he walks away.

- The next day

- Jimmy finds a letter with a map attached to it.

“Dear Jimmy

I will be waiting for you at sunset. This map will guide you to me.

Mary”.

- Jimmy gets there a sees frank in front of the tent.

- Frank says “enjoy your night with you eel girlfriend”.

- Jimmy looks inside the tent and see Mary tied up on a pole.

- He gets her down but she’s already dead.

- This trigger jimmy to seek revenge.

- A montage of the jimmy panning and making traps in secret.

- Sun rise

- Frank heads to his training space.

- He trips on a rope and a log swings down from the ceiling and knocks him out.

- Frank wakes up tied down on a table.

- Jimmy says “ you’re not going to hurt anyone again, and we need someone to replace Mary”.

- “Ladies and gentlemen we have a new addition to our family of freaks! I present to you, FRANK the Man Eel.

- Frank is floating around in the tank armless.

Friday, 3 February 2017

FSTS - New Story

Step Outline

Scene 1 –

The circus just came to a town and everyone is preparing for the upcoming show this weekend.

Jimmy (the circus cleaner) is cleaning is cleaning the outside of the mermaid tank. Mary (the mermaid) catches him looking at her and jimmy begins to blush.

Frank (strong man) come over, picks jimmy up and throws him into the tank and says “don’t forget about the inside”. As jimmy struggles to swim out of the tank, Mary helps him. (people laughing in the background).

Scene 2

Jimmy is cleaning the toilet. Frank shuts him in, picks up the cubical and shakes it. Frank finally puts down the toilet and jimmy comes out soaked. Everybody laughs (in the background).

Scene 3

The cleaner is mopping to floor. Frank comes in to the scene, pushes jimmy to the ground and uses him as l mop. Watching all of this happening from her tank, Mary the mermaid shouts at frank telling him to stop are she feels sorry from poor little Jimmy.

Scene 4

The next d morning Jimmy walks into the circus with some flowers that he’s planning to give to Mary. Before he gets to Mary, Frank comes over, grabs the flowers and stamps on them.

The shock and sadness in Jimmy’s face turns into anger. This is when he decides to get revenge.

Scene 5

Jimmy starts to plan out his revenge. This scene will be a montage of him cutting planks of wood, nailing and screwing things etc.

Scene 6

The next morning, frank wakes up and steps out of his caravan. He sees a piece of paper near his feet. He picks it up and sees at it’s a map (this map was created by Jimmy to lure him to his doom).

I'm not quite sure what kind of horrible things Jimmy is going to do to frank just yet.

Another idea I've got is to have the strong man end up getting the girl (Mary), and this is what would drive Jimmy to punish them both. Below are my designs for frank, I have coloured my favourite options.