Kicking off second year with the collaboration project. We're assigned into groups and asked to prepare ourselves for the project by creating a group blog. The name we picked as a group is Twisted Turtle Studios. As the three of us tries to create the logo/brand of our team, here's my attempt to design the bland from the chosen name.
Nice to see you getting the project started early with some nice designs. However your text...
ReplyDelete"Kicking off second yeah"....year / "as the three".....As the three / "we're assigned into"....We're assigned into / "the name we"...The name we.
Remember, this project is about being professional. Everyone makes mistakes but there is a few too many in that first paragraph to overlook - Particularly, given its your opening one.